First, good job on what must have been a challenging project. Here is what I think needs to be improved.
The Stars.
I don't mind the twinkly stars, although I don't particularly care for them either, but the stars that seem to be just seem to be blobs of color are really annoying me when I look at it. (I really love this piece, that is why I feel so strongly about the stars). I could do without 75 percent of the stars here. There are clusters that are rather poorly rendered as well, which are particularly distracting.
Other than that, you've got a fantastic piece of artwork. Don't stop trying to improve!!!!
A Breath Taking and for lack of a better word Stellar scene!! Such broad scope and beauty nearly as infinite as the space it portrays in all it bold beauty.
I love the brilliant colors both soothing and exciting as the flow. And with each flow is a twinkle of a star within the clouds themselves! This leaves you to delve, if you have the imagination, into what else is around each of those bright lights!
Believe me if you appreciate this image you already have the imagination and awe to look upon God's creation and give thanks that he gave us the ability to appreciate it as well and even want to recreate it as well! Awesome Beauty!!
The Stars.
I don't mind the twinkly stars, although I don't particularly care for them either, but the stars that seem to be just seem to be blobs of color are really annoying me when I look at it. (I really love this piece, that is why I feel so strongly about the stars). I could do without 75 percent of the stars here. There are clusters that are rather poorly rendered as well, which are particularly distracting.
Other than that, you've got a fantastic piece of artwork. Don't stop trying to improve!!!!
I love the brilliant colors both soothing and exciting as the flow. And with each flow is a twinkle of a star within the clouds themselves! This leaves you to delve, if you have the imagination, into what else is around each of those bright lights!
Believe me if you appreciate this image you already have the imagination and awe to look upon God's creation and give thanks that he gave us the ability to appreciate it as well and even want to recreate it as well! Awesome Beauty!!
The Artist has requested Critique on this Artwork
Please sign up or login to post a critique.